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I LOVE the part at the beginning where she wakes up, looks terrible and then sees Cordan and almost chokes. She reflects on her looks and I love how she then “flees silently up the stairs”! Haven’t we all done that at least once in our lives?😂 Very relatable.

I love when Isabel is reflecting at the difference in last time vs. this time at the book club. Very well worded and I love that you remembered and added it! Makes her very real and shows your handle on your character’s life and feelings!

It would be nice if the passage of time between Cordan’s last book club visit and this one had been addressed, though. Maybe the leader saying, “long time no see!” or something like that. Just to remind us how much time has passed and to feel more life-like. :)

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